Describe how you are going to use pitch, pause, pace, inflection and vocal idiosyncrasy/accent in your performance of text.

The monologue I'm reading is about someone who's meant to be hard-core but has got a terror about being reincarnated in a fish, because she can't swim.
I think to improve I need to slow down and stop being afraid of pauses and breath while I'm performing.
I also need to work on my accent, because the character is meant to be really, really common because she comes from a rough background, so I think I need to talk a lot more common for that monologue.
I also need to talk slightly deeper for the character.